#2
The intro is basically right, there are a couple spots that could be a bit cleaner though. I was thinking maybe you should add drums/bass because I wasn't expecting vocals because it sounded a bit empty, but I'd still suggest this. The vocals are pretty good through more of the more melodic parts, could use a bit more aggression in the "Trust I seek", although in the last one of these it sounded a lot better. The harmony in the chorus also sounded a bit odd to me. But as far as playing I only heard one extremely noticeable mistake which was right before the second chorus. The first lead is a bit sloppy in some parts and the flow just seemed strange. The second lead was also a bit messy, not too bad though. The quality of the song is good overall, just work on playing some of the riffs a bit cleaner.

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