#1
This is an old song. I made it about a year ago. Its pretty rough around the edges, but I think its quite catchy. So tell me what You think.Broken Bones. I need some work on the vocals but those can be added later. The guitar work is fairly simple, but i like it.
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GEAR
Guitars----
Aria:Ariana
Ibanez:RG7321
Peavey:Raptor Sig. series
Peavey:EXP Sig. series
ESP LTD: V-500
Amplifiers----
Orange 2X12 cab
Peavey: JSX
Peavey: XXL
#2
Ok, first, this needs better mixing. The drum machine and vocals (and bass?) are constantly getting drowned out. I do like some of the riffwork, especially the riff right after the first verse. The vocals tremolo effect was pretty cool. I didn't really care for the more aggressive vocals near the end, maybe if they were thickened up through some double tracking they would give the sound I think you intended but they sound pretty weak as is. I think you had some pretty good ideas but this definitely needs work.

Crit: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1031617
#3
k, thanks bro. ill definitly look at ur stuff too.
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GEAR
Guitars----
Aria:Ariana
Ibanez:RG7321
Peavey:Raptor Sig. series
Peavey:EXP Sig. series
ESP LTD: V-500
Amplifiers----
Orange 2X12 cab
Peavey: JSX
Peavey: XXL
#4
yeah +1 on the mixing, this song reminds me kind of NIN type stuff. Its prett cool, the vocals just need a little more power behind in the verse, the chorus is a little better, but you really cant understand what you are saying, so try to articulate some more. its a pretty cool track and it has potential. just needs some work

C4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1031713
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