#1
i made this to be sort of demo for my new Tiny Terror, but it turned out pretty cool. Just a little improvisation i made with my loop pedal. I had fun with it, decided to make a little vid. Tell me what you think, its a chord progression ive been messing with for a while, but this is just messing around. Tell me what you think, ive been playing for 2 years and was just wondering where i stand. thanks in advance, and C4c

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA

also, please rate the vid, thanks
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
Vox Valvetronix AD 30
Vox V847 Wah
Metal Muff EQ (broken )
Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA
#2
That's a pretty funky song man. That was a good job. Ofcourse when you loop the rhythm like that for 5 minutes it gets a bit over used, but you kep me interested with the lead part. If you can find yourself a nice hook or chorus part for the song it would be a pretty sweet tune! Good work.

Can you check out my thread and let me know if I'm going in the right direction with the song?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1031707

Thanks
Gear List


2002 Gibson SG Faded
Gibson Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Les Paul Classic
Oscar Schmitt OE30

Orange Rockerverb 50


Gas List

Gibson Firebird
#3
god, thats a great bass line. This song is pretty good. like the guy said b4 me, that backing riff gets a little boring, i suggest that u make a riff thats similar to that and switch it up a little bit. But the lead guitar work keeps me listening. cool song
and thnx for lookin at my stuff.
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#4
That's really cool, it's got an awesome grove. A little rough, but for a demo, that's great! Maybe just try a few more things w/ the rhythm to make it slightly less repetitive.
#7
It sounds cool, but it doesn't feel cool, if you get what I'm saying. I personally didn't like the tone and I just felt as if you weren't giving it your all, by the way your playing sounded.

It's a good song though, it's just rough imo, and the solo was kind of... it was really good but it was sharp. haha it had a bite to it
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness