#1
Verse 1:
Please don't listen to what I say
But come with me and let's run away
Because I miss you like crazy
And I think I'm going crazy so
I'll pack my bags and
You'll pack yours and we'll
Live out in the country

Pre-Chorus:
Throw away your worries, just come along with me

Chorus:
And I'll pack my bags if
You'll pack yours because
I miss you like crazy and
I'm just going crazy
So let's just run away

Verse 2:
I know it sounds insane
And I know there's not much time
But I promise I'll be yours
If only you'll be mine
And we'll spend our nights in the backseat
Listening to the radio blare
At peace, without a single care

Pre-Chorus
Chorus

Well, comments, concerns? Any tips would be great!
#2
You should try to change the chorus because it's the same as the 1st verse just rewritten.