#2
Really Good, the mix isn't quite perfect try toying around with the levels a bit more. The song seems really well put together. The vocals sound really good, just need to be turned up a little. I really like this song, sounds like a hit, haha.

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#3
I may actually redo the vocals because I had a cold when I did the vocal tracks so my voice wasn't quite at it's best. Are they too low throughout the whole song or just certain parts?
#4
Quite a catchy song. I like the guitars. Solo pretty good, doubled over...that take's practice dosn't it! Oooooh dodgy jungle drums. Worked well.

I think the drums need to be louder! Much louder. Seriously.

I actually enjoyed the voice...reminds me of AC/DC.

Overall a well constructed well written song, mix just needs to be .....................................................remixed. Good man.

You're other song sounds good too. You don't always need to double your vocals over. Also you don't need to pan fully L/R, 1/2 way either way is usually better.
Orophin