#2
The riff sounds cool, i like it it could use a 2nd harmony here and their, I don't think the drums complement the weird timing main riff though.
#3
Quote by x Misanthropy x
The riff sounds cool, i like it it could use a 2nd harmony here and their, I don't think the drums complement the weird timing main riff though.


Sweet thanks! Yeah i only used that drum part to show off the riff. Ill make the drums a bit more complimentry.
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#5
Quote by BloodRain
nice i love the drums xD

nice man
but its really hard to play this...


Tech Death is always hard!!

hahaha, and thanks
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#6
I really liked it. I liked the chaotic feeling of the riff, and the bass fit perfectly behind it. Very very enjoyable. I'd love to see this extended into a full song! The drums just topped everything off. If you get a chance, crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1031820
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#7
I Added more to the song! Check it out and see how it sounds so far.
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#8
Quote by Nunwhxre 666
I really liked it. I liked the chaotic feeling of the riff, and the bass fit perfectly behind it. Very very enjoyable. I'd love to see this extended into a full song! The drums just topped everything off. If you get a chance, crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1031820



Thank you so much for the very kind compliments
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#10
Quote by saddam
Great intro riff, I liked the whole staccato thing going on. The riffs that you added were a sudden decrease in quality... I still would like to hear the finished product though.
Can't really say anything else, it's too short for that

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thanks for the advice man
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#12
Quote by BKGMorley
its pretty atonal and groovey


I've never gotten atonal before as a compliment, thank you!
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#13
That was pretty off the wall, I think the drums really complemented the main riff well despite the oddness of it, and there was some nice use of harmonies there. I love how the bass line complements the riff also. I think the next riff is better than the first, but the pause after the buildup was WAYY too long, I think one measure of 3/4 would fit it perfect. I want to see this turn into a full song dude, good job dude.
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#14
Quote by SatanicShredder
That was pretty off the wall, I think the drums really complemented the main riff well despite the oddness of it, and there was some nice use of harmonies there. I love how the bass line complements the riff also. I think the next riff is better than the first, but the pause after the buildup was WAYY too long, I think one measure of 3/4 would fit it perfect. I want to see this turn into a full song dude, good job dude.


Thanks man, ill be working on it!

Now, the learning part is going to be difficult! hahaha
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