#1
I can hear my echoes loud and clear, bouncing off the walls
I'm waiting for someone to hear my voice, to hear my distant calls
I'm stuck between the road to Hell, and the road to Amazing Grace
I'm doing the best, the best I can, to reach a higher place

It might take me some time, to straighten out my act
So give me some time, give me some time to rewind
It might take me some time, to get myself out of this ugly place
I can't go forward, I can't go back, I'm taking the time to erase my past

Turn the lights off, and leave me here to help get my mind clear
It's obvious, so obvious, I'm starting to disappear
And when I'm done, when I'm done, my transformation's just begun

It might take me some time, to straighten out my act
So give me some time, give me some time to rewind
It might take me some time, to get myself out of this ugly place
I can't go forward, I can't go back, I'm taking the time to erase my past
And when the nightfall comes, I'm standing in front of the midnight sun

It might take me some time, to straighten out my act
So give me some time, give me some time to rewind
It might take me some time, to get myself out of this ugly place
I can't go forward, I can't go back, I'm taking the time to erase my past

I'm a new person--
#2
I can hear my echoes loud and clear, bouncing off the walls
I'm waiting for someone to hear my voice, to hear my distant calls

thats the best part
#3
hey tht was a great song i relli like the 4 paragraph it relli hits me lol.

keep goin with ur writing
elliott
#5
What style of music? If you do it right I think this could turn out beautifully. You've got some really good stuff there.
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