Quote by Childofbodom21
Its just an acoustic song that I wrote:
Feedback please?
Thanks in advance


You need to hone you song writing skill. I can throw you a few books if you like. When you start to write those simple chords seem to be good enough but when you have obsessed over it for years, that's when the really good stuff flows out. I wish you luck.


I wrote a song today i dunno how good it is but i would appreciate it if you told me what you initially thought.... the first thing that pops into your head

Last edited by silentdud at Dec 27, 2008,
I liked it. I don't know really know how to describe it. When the second guitar comes in it gave me sort of an eric clapton feel. Also thanks for the help.