#2
I think it'd sound better "trading water for fire"

but yeah, sounds good to me.
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#3
Haiku? Very nice, if different.

Zoo is quite a weak word for the message you're trying to put across, but I realise there's not much else that goes with "creature" Maybe just a single "animal?"
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#4
Wild creature?..
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