#1
Hey UG'ers

This is my new song Flew Into The Sun

Recorded with my new Ibanez 2570z that I got for xmas :p

This is for my band the Ninja Pirate Super Models.
Even though I actually wrote the whole song, so I thought I would pop it on here.
There will be a newer version added soon with a more interesting solo (as didn't really spend much time on it) and hopefully drums. Even though drums could ruin it, I'll give it a go anyway

C4C Plz ?!?!?

Cheers Guys
Last edited by l3xbi at Dec 29, 2008,
#2
pretty mellow... the lyrics are really good, the vocals sometimes get pretty flat, and sometimes they kinda mumble. When the second lead guitar comes it, it sounds good, but i think that you could work with that a little more to get the 2 leads to work better together.

Crit mine? equally mellow
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1033216

also check the vid in my sig if you want
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
Vox Valvetronix AD 30
Vox V847 Wah
Metal Muff EQ (broken )
Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA