#1
This has taken me a bit of time to get to this stage, so please listen and give me honest opinion. All views on improvement will be thought about seriously. Thanks guys

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'Think'

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If you like that one, you can listen to my other new track 'Paradise' which is similar in style but less depressing.
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#2
Amazing. I really felt a Coldplay vibe from the intro. It took a few measures for me to get used to the vocals, but the lyrics and melody in the verse were solid. I love when a song has a chorus without lyrics, you know? The pre-chorus was really good as it built tension to the chorus, especially with the backing vocals which were great. The second verse vocals really sounded hurt and vulnerable, which seemed to fit with the overall theme of the song.

Overall, a really kick ass song. I would love to walk around town listening to music like this. Good sounding vocals, catchy melody, and great tone with the guitar and bass. So keep it up and again, great job. I honestly can't think of an improvement to add to this recording.

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#4
although it isnt really my thing, it is really good. The vocals are a little weird in some points, but thats just my bias. i really like the melody around 1:14. everything is tight as ****. drums are steady, maybe add a few more fills. the little solo thing was cool, it reminded me of death cab for cutie alot. which is a good thing. haha.
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#5
I love this it's mixed very well and it's all very clean and tight too. I really like the vocals and just everything, the song is very well balanced. I love the riff in the begining your tone is really good. The vocals kind of make me think of like a little kid (tommy the who a little)

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#6
the paradise song has a summer feeling to it
was a whole band in on this song or was everything by you??

im not really into songs that have singing but think was good
VERY GOOD!!

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#8
Crit 4 Crit - IE tell me what you think of my song and I'll tell you what you think of mine It's the way maaaaaan
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#9
Thanks a lot for the detailed crit on my songs. Firstly, I'm liking the accent haha, nice vocals. Great intro and bridge going into the chorus. Definitely sounded like this could be played on the radio; I really liked how the instruments were more than just plain playing background sounds, everything blended together nicely.
#10
Interesting that you chose to critique my death metal when you play this, haha, but it's cool.

The tone is great on the instruments, but I'd rather get cancer than listen to your singing. No offense. The harmony in the background is nice, but your accent and singing is very annoying to me (keep in mind I don't like this style of singing at all).

Nice music, though.
#11
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Interesting that you chose to critique my death metal when you play this, haha, but it's cool.

The tone is great on the instruments, but I'd rather get cancer than listen to your singing. No offense. The harmony in the background is nice, but your accent and singing is very annoying to me (keep in mind I don't like this style of singing at all).

Nice music, though.


I think that takes the biscuit! LOL

Thanks for all comments guys, really apprechiated
Orophin
#13
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I think that takes the biscuit! LOL

Thanks for all comments guys, really apprechiated


I'm not trying to be rude, just understand I'm not into this genre, which is totally okay. Just because I don't like it doesn't mean it's bad =)
#14
oh wow, epic intro. i love your clean tone. the vocals were a tiny bit whiny. they could come up in the mix a bit as well. the chorus is amazing. this actually gives me a bit of a "cure" vibe. did you do the drums yourself? they were really good. i really enjoyed the lyrics as well.

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#15
first off all, Nice recording quality, Im listening with Headphones and instantly noticed the Stereo. Great song, it is really well put together. I really liked the Keys and vocal chorus, in parts. I dont think i can find anything wrong with this one.

Not much of a crit on my part, but you could check out my song.
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1033216

and maybe the vid in my sig
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