the fact that your pick is so light that i can hear it is annoying but other than that very solid musically.... wouldnt pay for it, but thats just cause its not my style.
The guitar on this was nice- it's a pretty basic progression, but you do enough cool things rhythmically and melodically that it stays interesting. The vocals were quite good overall- there were some parts where they weakened or went a little out of key, but in the context of the song it works. Nice job overall.