#1
Hey UG.
I recorded a simple blues improvisation video and posted it on youtube, and I was wondering if you would mind having a look and giving me some feedback?
Heres the link to the video, By the way I look like a complete idiot in the video and my hair is super-dooper-messed up.
The Video.
Tim.

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Last edited by TimBFMV at Dec 29, 2008,
#2
Any comments?
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#3
I enjoyed it.
Better than I can do anyways. lol. It was fun and while I don't listen to the blues enough to give you an in depth analysis I do think your playing is at least decent.

If I were to change anything about your playing style, I would tell you not to put so many stops that are dead notes. While having them in there is fine ( i assume it was on purpose!), just having so many draws away from the notes that ring in some instances.

You were getting pretty good quality sound for using a "camera not meant for recording" and the tone you were getting was nice as well (I was not expecting that at all from that guitar).

keep on doin
-Ryan
#4
Thankyou that put a smile on my face

Edit: I dont usuallly listen to blues either, but I have been learning it lately and i enjoy playing it because i can just express my playing. I listen to Grunge, Rock and Metal+Some alternative. and i love classic rock too.
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Last edited by TimBFMV at Dec 30, 2008,
#5
That was pretty damn good! One minor piece of crit I have is that you only seem to be using about two scale positions. There's nothing really wrong with that, though.

Out of interest, how old are you?
#6
Interesting picking technique you have there lol.
I'd like to add that there's nothing wrong with repeating phrases, there were a couple of phrases there that I feel would convey better feeling if it was repeated.

And JDZYX, the OP seems pretty young, I think maybe 12-14?
#7
yeah im 12 shhh dont tell.
and thanks for the positive feedback!
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#8
i thought it sounded pretty good.
good blues is always appreciated.
I thought you pick'd weird but thats me
good job
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#9
yeah I did pick a bit wierd, Dunno whats up with that.
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#10
any more comments?
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#11
over all good job, just be careful, you looked like you needed a better hold on the guitar at times.