It was good, but if I may offer one piece of constructive criticism, play it with some feeling next time. I kept expecting Slash-esque vibrato on a lot of parts and didn't get it, I know you can do it!
"Be as radical as reality."
- V.I. Lenin
haha yeah as you can tell i'm a huge slash fan (before the guitar hero days) and i'm planning on recording a cover of some of his classics like estranged and november rain soon, so hopefully the slower style will let me go with the vibrato a bit more
Guitars :
Fender American Stratocaster
Jackson RR3
Ibanez S470
Epiphone Les Paul