#1
Well this is my band's newest piece I've been working on, still needs some slight kinks ironed out but overall it is pretty much done. I wrote this one alone as opposed to with our other guitarist, explaining the radical differences. Note also that these are just temporary drums until my drummer gets his ass over here to put them in
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Sex Anthem.zip
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#2
First few riffs reminded me a lot of SikTh, in a good way.
The riff that has the gravity blast underneath it is really good and works really well when it comes back into half time.
The weird time sig change riff (9/8, 12/8 etc) feels off. Doesn't quite click for me.
The cool muted riff that doubles and then gets the solo is KILLER. I love it.
The next few bars didn't really much for me, until bar 70. The trem picking and then the sweeping is sweet, and works really well with the next section of weird sweeping
Then it comes back into the SikTh riff pretty well.

All in all, not bad. Not bad at all man. Would be keen to hear it recorded.
#5
Thanks dudes. I put up a teaser I recorded for our next show if you dudes wanna listen. This is also easier to play than our last song.
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#6
This song is really not in the genres I write in but its fun to hear something very new to me.

I really like how this song feels chaotic yet not random. Its pretty crazy but I know for a fact that every note you use was consciously chosen to be there. I also liked how fluidly you transitioned between the different time signatures and tempoes. I also thought the really fast harmonies you put in there were really cool.

Also, I loved the riff at bar 27, that one's amazing
#8
Alright.
Back again.
I expect a C4C for this.

I will reassert (is that even a word?) that the main riff is overwhelming in comparision to the rest of the song.
Alright.
Going through it again, this is actually quite good.
I raised the drum volume level and realized that the drumming really helps shape this piece.
The guitarwork is excellent as well, and if you can play this piece proficiently, then I'm amazed.

Overall, the riffs confused me and I could hardly tell the sections apart.
It's heavy on the twiddels towards the end, and the ending was kinda anti-climatic.

The riffing style and structure is discordant and strange.
I enjoyed it.
I'm gunna keep your song as reference material.

Alright.
As I'm being anti-climatic myself, I shall give you a 8.5/10. You could shape-up that ending into something monstrous.

I mentioned C4C.
If you feel inclined to do so, go to the Mein Comps link.
It's not Nazi or Hilter related, though it may seem like it.
It's just a place where I keep all my comps.
#9
Hey thanks alot for the input man. I was kind of at a loss for the end, so I'm thinking now that another solo would end this up nicely. Also a problem I seem to have is that I write decent riffs and then when it comes to turning it into a song I can't write good riffs that match the other one.

Other than an insane solo what do you think would work for the ending?
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#10
Here's some inspiration.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fCZvOHd5dg&feature=related


I mean,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UVujRBZGTfk.

And the end of Death of a Dead Day (the song).

I know this song falls more into Tech-Death, but Magero does have a point.
Use some of Sikth's dynamics for the outro.
And a ridiculous solo, of course.
#11
Ok, I've got some ideas, thanks man. Also I critted your song Elonia.
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