#1
The Crook And The Opinion

Crooked mirror on the wall,
It’s No clearer if you see it all,
Such a mess,
Needs a vet,
In a box and gassed to death,

Would have been easier to say that I do,
Would have been easier to change my views,
Ahh,
I’ve got no respect for you,
I’ve got no respect for you,

Stupid question in your head,
Turn around and go back again,
Count to ten,
Write a list,
When in stone the point is missed,

Would have been easier to say that I do,
Would have been easier to baa with them too,
Ahh,
I’ve got no respect for you,
I’ve got no respect for you,

Crooked mirror on the wall,
The nails broke,
It waits to fall.
And Like That. He was Gone.

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#2
I don't really know what to say about this except that I liked it. It has a nice flow and reads well, and is subtle enough to be intriguing. If it's a song perhaps it'd be a little short, but that's up to you of course.
My only qualm with this piece was the line 'Would have been easier to baa with them too'... "baa" would easily be misinterpreted as "bar" and be confusing, even if it's only a little thing.

Anyway good work.