#1
Hey guys


This is my 21st song
I've still to finish the solo's, I'd appreciate ideas for them :P

It's a kinda harmonic minor sounding piece, with guitars drums choirs and violins...

Enjoy


also, crit for crit

Attachments:
Song 21(Finished).zip
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Last edited by FNAFJ at Jan 1, 2009,
#2
Heavy as fuck! Excellent transition from the violon solo to the verse.

Nothing I would really change, although the transition to the clean part was a little abrupt.
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#3
Quote by ..NEM..
Heavy as fuck! Excellent transition from the violon solo to the verse.

Nothing I would really change, although the transition to the clean part was a little abrupt.


yeah, I was meaning to change that... and maybe make it a bit longer

you got anything you want me to crit?
My Band =]
We play some goffic pish
Its fun

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#4
Quote by FNAFJ
yeah, I was meaning to change that... and maybe make it a bit longer

you got anything you want me to crit?

Nope, I haven't.
"A war is coming, I've seen it in my dreams. Fires sweeping through the earth, bodies in the streets, cities turned to dust. Retaliation..."


Check out my amazing band!
An Abstract Illusion