#2
not bad dude, not something i would listen to all the time but not bad, work on the transition from acoustic to fast electric, sounded way to sudden
"We carry death out of the village!"
#3
nice song , really liked the acoustic and piano parts.

i agree with marskell, i was so expecting distorted chords same tempo nice drumbeat ... main-stream-y you know, something for the singer to sing his soul out haha

i guess you could throw in some chords before the tempo change or try to play around with the drum beat , maybe not double bass but more simple 4/4 standart you know and keep the double bass for later.

and it's short.

well , that's it already...


heres a song of my own ,
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1034483

Any help is appreciated.
english is not my native language