not bad dude, not something i would listen to all the time but not bad, work on the transition from acoustic to fast electric, sounded way to sudden
"We carry death out of the village!"
nice song , really liked the acoustic and piano parts.

i agree with marskell, i was so expecting distorted chords same tempo nice drumbeat ... main-stream-y you know, something for the singer to sing his soul out haha

i guess you could throw in some chords before the tempo change or try to play around with the drum beat , maybe not double bass but more simple 4/4 standart you know and keep the double bass for later.

and it's short.

well , that's it already...

heres a song of my own ,

Any help is appreciated.
english is not my native language