#1
This song has been a hit with my friends and stuff but thought id take it to people who aren't afraid to criticize me. its called diaries


Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Piece Of Him Dies

What's A Friend
Someone Who's There
By Your Side To The End
Not The Guy
Who Puts a Knife In Your Back
And Says It's Not My Fault
It's Just What She Wants
So It's What She Got

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Piece Of Him Dies

What's Left To Choose
The Angels Or The Lies
What's Left To Do
Give Up Or Give It All To Try
When Love Is Neverendin'
You Won't Get By, By Pretendin'
Who Can You Trust
Your Love, Your Enemy, Your Bestfriend

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Piece Of Him Dies

He Wants Her Back
He'll Fight For Her
Till He's Blue And Black
Till Fear Kicks In
And The Enemy's Taunting
And The Fire In His Blood
Fueled By Passion
In The Chamber Of His Heart That's Deciding...

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Piece Of Him Dies
Keep On Keepen' On
#3
Get Rid Of The Constant Capitalization Please, It Makes It Difficult To Read, And I Severely Doubt It Has A Purpose.
#5
He Pours Another Shot
Mr Daniels And The Captain
Their All That He's Got
After What She Did
I Don't Blame Him
What The **** Is She Doin'
Now His Heart
It's Like It's Explodin'

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Peice Of Him Dies

What's A Friend
Someone Who's There
By Your Side To The End
Not The Guy
Who Puts a Knife In Your Back
And Says It's Not My Fault
It's Just What She Wants
So It's What She Got

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Peice Of Him Dies

What's Left To Choose
The Angels Or The Lies
What's Left To Do
Give Up Or Give It All To Try
When Love Is Neverendin'
You Won't Get By, By Pretendin'
Who Can You Trust
Your Love, Your Enemy, Your Bestfriend

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Peice Of Him Dies

He Wants Her Back
He'll Fight For Her
Till He's Blue And Black
Till Fear Kicks In
And The Enemy's Taunting
And The Fire In His Blood
Fueled By Passion
In The Chamber Of His Heart That's Deciding...

Cloud Of Smoke
Liquor And Knives
The Heart Screams
And It Cries
Cause Of Her
A Peice Of Him Dies

I like this version better....I also took the liberty of writing a 2nd part to it, it feels like it should be a 3 piecer. fire me a message if you want the 2nd part.