I'm really digging those guitar parts. Well played, nice tone (though maybe bring the treble up a bit.) I think this is cool stuff though, all I can say is I think the delay you had on felt a little out of time in places, but overall its a really nice piece. Both of your recordings remind me a lot of the clean guitar parts on Low's Songs for a Dead Pilot album.

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i like the tone except for what the other mentioned bring the treble up a little bit. maybe add some drums. it repeats a lot but the other guitar parts make it a little less noticable. good harmonizing i liked that. i liked your picture of the cat in marshmellows .