#1
A Quart Of My Oil Can Lubricate Your Internal Combustion Engine For The Night

VERSE 1
Listen to the nightbirds calling thine name.
Rip the walls off your cage, strip it down
Don't fear judgement,
there's nothing left to house shame

VERSE 2
Give into the sea and it's veil of treachery.
Glistening for eternity, forever and a day
Where is your savior?
For this is not hope that you emulsify.

PRE-CHORUS
(Free me, save me tonight)
Sovereigns only plight
(Free me, save me tonight)
Liberating the parasite

CHORUS
Feel the fire burn
Deep in your soul
Nowhere left to turn
Nowhere left to go

Feel the case rust
Deep in your heart
I'll give you some oil
How's that for a start?

VERSE 3
Flee, for the gunslingers ain't far outta sight.
Pursuing endlessly, blood in the water
Don't look to me,
this endeavour was only for the night.
#2
i too, have a les paul ultra.

and i loved the title, solid lycis too.
the only thing i would change is the average person does not know what "emulsify" means
maybe change to "radiate" to rhyme with "day"

(i don't have a piece to c4c btw. just songs if you really feel obligated)
#3
Quote by B00bs
A Quart Of My Oil Can Lubricate Your Internal Combustion Engine For The Night

VERSE 1
Listen to the nightbirds calling thine name.
Rip the walls off your cage, strip it down
Don't fear judgement,
there's nothing left to house shame
hmm, here seems vaugue, but very solid


VERSE 2
Give into the sea and it's veil of treachery.
Glistening for eternity, forever and a day
Where is your savior?
For this is not hope that you emulsify.
this has nothing to do with the previous verse
PRE-CHORUS
(Free me, save me tonight)
Sovereigns only plight
(Free me, save me tonight)
Liberating the parasite

CHORUS
Feel the fire burn
Deep in your soul
Nowhere left to turn
Nowhere left to go

Feel the case rust
Deep in your heart
I'll give you some oil
How's that for a start?
Love it
VERSE 3
Flee, for the gunslingers ain't far outta sight.
Pursuing endlessly, blood in the water
Don't look to me,
this endeavour was only for the night.



all together 9.5 out of 10 in a song if it was hard rock/metal/deathcore etc


2.5 if anything slow