This is one of the first songs written for my band, the drums are pretty much placeholders because we didn't have a drummer at the time of writing this, so he'll come up with his own drumbeat eventually.

C4C, ect.

edit: Track 4 is the bass even though it's called an overdriven guitar track - I lowered the tuning by an octave. (I don't like GP's bass sounds, they never seem to be loud enough through my speakers)
Last edited by Azureknightmare at Dec 31, 2008,
It sounds good man, fits together really nicely. I was going to tell you to add notes ringing out in the pauses of the breakdown but then it went into that
The only thing I would change is that it seems to repeat alot, maybe add a solo in somewhere.

edit: Crit please?

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