#1
Predator instincts overcome
Human restraints tossed aside
Mercy and pity gone, rage is my guide
You will be my bride

Sweet death stench
Morbid love affair
At peace, with you
My beautiful corpse-doll

Seduced by the beauty of innocence
Lusting for the moment of the kill
Warm blood sating my passions
Sanity returns, I've taken my fill.

Sweet death stench
Morbid love affair
At peace, with you
My precious corpse-doll

As nature rapes you once again
Sealing away your perfection
The earth reclaims its own
Your loss a maddening infection

Sweet death stench
Morbid love affair
At peace, with you
My betrothed corpse-doll

Corpse disposal
Stealing my beloved
Corpse disposal
Stealing my bride
corpse disposal
Stealing my pride

Corpse disposal


First time I've ever written lyrics. I'm somewhat impressed, since I expected even worse. 4/10.
#6
nice but the structure should've been shown clearly.

reminded me a tad of Necrosadistic Warning by Cannibal Corpse (that's just how my twisted mind works, look up the lyrics, you may see a connection) and that's always a plus. If it could be sung in the right way it'd rock so 8/10
C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1035891

an theheriaparent what's whitechapel (sp?). A Death metal band i assume?
Last edited by Demoniac_UK at Jan 1, 2009,