#1
c4c, leave me a link though



She came empty handed
with one plea
spare my child's life
(its not yours)

She came empty handed
with a tear in her eye
and a sword in the deepest
darkest part of her heart

left alone and cold I said:

"We are the fire
with love and passion we'll float higher
but our motivations
and inspirations
are filled with corruption
your child's life is as lost as any other,"

He'll burn like all the others,
and yet i can't help but feel something is wrong
why be the fire
if we cannot love one another?

She came empty handed
with one plea
spare my child's life
(its not yours)

She came empty handed
with a tear in her eye
and a sword in the deepest
darkest part of her heart

left alone and cold I said:

But of course we are the fire
born to burn the world
never to love
never to live
abused by man we shall be

our fathers and mothers
bore us for this purpose
because:
we are the flame that took your child's life
we are the flame that stole your beating heart

we are the fire
#4
Quote by Demoniac_UK
that's quite good
is it a poem? and what are the lyrical themes?
i assume you got the name from the Trivium song

c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1035891



thank you for the crit, i just got yours
and yes it's a poem.
and i dont listen to trivium much so i didnt know they had a song named that xD
#5
lol
Quote by dead-fish
^My god.


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