#2
wow... you pretty good...

you are big fan of fall out boys? your song have the fall out boy concept...
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#3
you need to work on your phrasing...a lot. The solo part on the end needs some direction if you know what i mean, it is more of just a bunch of notes thrown together. Rhythm is all over the place
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#4
Yeah that was pretty random sounding...especially the drums... it sounded kind of... weird hippy rockish? so not really my thing anyway. Maybe if you slowed the verses down and changed the drums up

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Last edited by SPBY at Jan 2, 2009,
#5
It was alright. You need to tidy up the rythym and work on your phrasing in the solo like add some pauses, change note speed, use vibrato
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