#1
im glad you went to another party
'cause mine got out of control.
motel six and a new years trip
"goodbye nicholas. no one even knows who you are if i say your name"

somehow tangled up in a fight,
unless you're sleeping by then.
our cleaning lady gets paid
even though she can't make a bed.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Last edited by freshtunes at Jan 2, 2009,
#2
Quote by freshtunes
im glad you went to another party
'cause mine got out of control.
motel six and a new years trip
"goodbye nicholas. no one even knows who you are if i say your name"

somehow tangled up in a fight,
unless you're sleeping by then.
our cleaning lady gets paid
even though she can't make a bed.


idk about this, not my favorite from you. i still enjoy it, the vagueness especially. the last stanza is pretty stellar.

nothing else to say really, just didn't want this to drift into oblivion with no replies.
#3
This is a good simple piece that very nicely sums up a certain emotion. Very enjoyble.