So you'd like to feel
When the day is done
Unaccomplished, at a rest,
out of luck interest,
Just be prepared when they come
Hit the ground, take the best

Could you call me out
Draw that knife on your tongue
Without a doubt, claim some pain
Through all your pride, run with Cain
Watch yourself on the fence
Either way, you'll be crawling up

Fire on your will
Fire on your eyes
It's all I want, caught in my sight
In it's smoke I'll rise
Dear, you're lucky.
We're all out of fuel for you

Soon they'll see. Yes, soon they'll see. Pioneers can prove it all to you.

Once again, it's my first song. Any constructive criticism would be extremely appreciated.
Current Gear:
Gibson Les Paul Studio
Gibson Explorer Standard
Tradition Strat
Crafter Acoustic

Peavey Classic 30
Line 6 DL4
Dano Fish 'n Chips
MXR Phase 90
Digitech Bad Monkey
Boss MD-2 Distortion
Dunlop Crybaby