#1
Think of this song as a Nirvana type of song...


Adages


Grab the bull, by the horns
I've been cursed, I've been scorned
Love is blind, But I can see
Just fine

(chorus)-X2
Sometimes adages can be
disadvantages you see
I know I'm right, but you say I'm wrong

Caught between a rock
And a hard place,
but there's no cuts, or blood on my face

(repeat chorus)-X2

(instrumental break)

Wake up and smell
The scent of roses
Only thing I smell
Political corruption

(Repeat chorus)-X3

c4c
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Last edited by popeye100 at Jan 3, 2009,
#2
i did some editing... now what do you think?
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!


#3
the 3 areas of what i guessed were verses werent structured the same way as eachother. if i was thinking of this as a nirvana song i guess id notice similar structure of the verses. but idk maybe they somehow work out a totally different way in your head than what im seeing.
Yea that's right, I want something to explode

I've been deaf, now I want noise

LOUD LOVE
#4
Sometimes adages can be
disadvantages you see
I know I'm right, but you say I'm wrong

I would just like to say I like this chorus because when I read it aloud, I very easily got the rhythm and it flows very well. In comparison, the second verse of the chorus is a little rougher, but I'm sure it works out with the music.
Cause I love feelin' dirty
And I love feelin' cheap
And I love it when you hurt me
So drive those staples deep
#5
Thanx guys... the verses do flow well, or at least it sounds that way when I sing it... its just hard to write it down and make it look like it
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my last fail was breaking up with my gf.

that's going to suck for a while


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Well, not really haha!