#1
from the parapet
we leap
astonishing the huddled masses
who with mouths agape
appear to be siphoning
our courage

unknownst to them,
it is not courage
but impulse
which compels us.
ritualized fatalities
remind us of our mortality

the air crackles
with a sound monstrous and holy
we become the ground.


^comment/critique, and I'll do the same
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You put parentheses in parentheses. I...I...I think I love you.

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#2
Quote by Beware!Criminal
from the parapet
we leap
astonishing the huddled masses
who with mouths agape
appear to be siphoning
our courage

unknownst to them,
it is not courage
but impulse
which compels us.
ritualized fatalities
remind us of our mortality

the air crackles
with a sound monstrous and holy
we become the ground.


^comment/critique, and I'll do the same


10$ says you're ugly!
#3
Quote by bucketned
10$ says you're ugly!


haha

It's not just talking about myself,
nor is it about suicide.
Quote by hug a llama
You put parentheses in parentheses. I...I...I think I love you.

Quote by Vos
THANK YOU! You're my hero!
#5
Quote by bucketned
i like it, it has a nice selection of words
for metal im assuming?


Thanks.

It's not really meant to be a song; it's just free verse.
Quote by hug a llama
You put parentheses in parentheses. I...I...I think I love you.

Quote by Vos
THANK YOU! You're my hero!