#1
here's a song with lyric inspired by Psalm 45 v1

MY HEART IS ASTIR
http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Spectrum+GT/music/all/play506706

My heart is astir with a goodly theme
I will address these verses
To the King of Kings
My heart overflows with a noble cause
I will ascribe my worship
To the Lord of Lords


My tongue is the pen of a gifted scribe
My voice the ink that flows
My heart a living manuscript
Where worship is composed

Chorus

My hands the tools of an artisan
With fingers trained to dance
Over ivory inlaid frets they skip
His worship to enhance

Al
#2
pretty good... the rhyme between lines 1 and 3 in the first verse is almost nonexistent, and line 1 of verse 2 bothers me a little bit grammarwise, but apart from that excellent!
it also could be longer... but that's just my opinion