#1
Hey UG,

Just thought i'd post up my first attempt at some recording, It's got a kind of grungy heavy, rythmy feel with a short solo in the middle. Still needs a lot of work.

I'm considering adding lyrics and a few interludes.


Constructive criticism is nice ^.^

Rob


File can be found here
#2
it's not too bad. especially for a first attempt. like the drum beat. do admit the solo needs work. maybe throw in a 'bit legato in addition to the tapping. the main riff is pretty decent. i liked it.
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