#1
Hey everyone of Ultimate-Guitar. I wrote these words as basically a come back at my old band. Basically a song existed that sounded very similar to a song called Rescue Me by Y&T Tempo was a match, rhythm and chord sequence, intro nearly exact, it was all a bit suspicious. So basically this is just the start, I've put together something that is to the same chord sequence as both and the intro lyrics to the same lyrical melody as my old bands referancing the copy and stolen ideas, so here it is


So now you go and take them off
Take notes and lines that you don't own
Throw it all away
Cause You Don't Own Them
They asked us to be one big lie
To "trust the words they stole and played them all night"
And now "Rescue Me"

do you think I should continue I have ideas for the continuation, and think it would be fun, whats your views on the situation and how could I make the lyrics a bit more ambiguous?
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So if I buy a Les Paul standard and throw it 200 mph, its binding will generate downforce?
#2
it would be really interesting to here your opinions on these lyrics, or whether I should continue working on this
Quote by Bazilisck311
So if I buy a Les Paul standard and throw it 200 mph, its binding will generate downforce?
#3
Okay so I have a evised rewrite of the same part, do you prefer this or the origibal

So now you go and take me out
With Stolen lines and shatered lives
Replaced them in my mind
ause you don't own me.
They asked us to hold down a lie
To "Trust these word" they "stole"
And played with our rights
So "Rescue Me"

So yeah some imput would be very much appreciated!!
Quote by Bazilisck311
So if I buy a Les Paul standard and throw it 200 mph, its binding will generate downforce?