#1
[Verse 1][Pre-chorus][Verse 2][Pre-chorus][Chorus][Verse 3][Pre-chorus][Chorus][Doom section][Outro]
Our passing glance, our shining source, the precipice we dance upon
Our passing glance, our shining source, the precipice of life enspawned
Attachments:
Breathing Life Into Dead Tongues.zip
#2
By far mate the best effing song you have ever done...... BY FAR!!!!!!

absolutely LOVE IT!!!!

cant wait to hear it live!!!!
"We carry death out of the village!"
#3
This song is quite epic, which is something that is true of most good melodic death metal.
#5
Really solid stuff man. I'll get more in-depth later as I've got things I have to take care of right now.

Only thing I got to say now is that I think you should try some variations on the piano in the outro (measure 153, when it's "started"). Not that I think it's repetetive, I just think that could really strengthen the outro.


Once again, great job!
#6
Only thing I got to say: ****ING EPIC!

Now when can I hear a recorded version?
"Fly with me forever high
And with these wings
We'll set the world on fire
Fly with me through scorching skies
You and I - The lie of lies"

-Symphony X
#8
i see im not your whore any more mate! oh good news, jack. as soon as you get this call me!
"We carry death out of the village!"
#9
Intro was cool, loved the chording. 9-20 is cool, even though it's done to death, I'm a sucker for a cool melody played over a chugging riff. Main riff is nice, but I prefer the way it's done in the verse over it. It's just amazing.

Chorus is really cool. Guitars have a nice melody going, and the drums are groovy. The rest of the song is fine, but the outro is really cool. Love the melody there. The keyboard part between the outro and half-time section is beautiful

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#10
friggin blew me away man...
i love it. It's sounds so epic.
i especially love the outro, the half time part , the prechorus and the intro..
really amazing. nice work with the 5/4 time measure in the chorus
can't wait for some real recording.
the percussion is great too!

the strings fit nicely in..


overall 9/10
keep up the good work

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