#1
Always reaching out
To distant hands that decline
Always breathing deep
In the presence of those who curse your life
Fading and out
Of a subjective reality
So distant from those who see
You as an abnormality

Desperate
For their acceptance
Calling out
A fading whisper in the dark
Inaudible ears fail to transcribe
Your decibel heavy pleas

Wandering in your solitude
Shadows take on shapes that
Mirror your social destitute
A stranger with a story to tell
To an under educated mass
A stranger with a story to tell
To those who never learned to read

Desperate
For their acceptance
Calling out
A fading whisper in the dark
Inaudible ears fail to transcribe
Your decibel heavy pleas

Falling from your ambition
Trying to stray from your
Emotionally driven decision
To be in the grace of any company but
Your starving dreams
Fading out, your whispers..
Fading out

If you the point is foggy, (though I doubt it is) it's about a social reject who is losing the ambition to find any positive social standing. Heavily inspired by isis.
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#2
good ideas in they're
but if you tried to put it over a song it might be difficult due to the varied length of lines
jsut a little fiddling will get it good to go