#2
it's actually not bad.


if you worked on your singing just a little bit more you'd have been excellent.

and a little bit too many guitar mistakes but that can be easily fixed.


a really good start.
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#3
the slop on the guitar is mostly because it's a rough demo. i'm most interested in the vocal performance, because i don't normally try to sing like neil young. what was good, what was bad?