#1
Song me and my friend wrote, we know its kinda crappy, we're better at writing riffs than lyrics, so any help would be appreciated.


Looking in the mirror
Staring back at you
is a lonely stranger
but that's nothing new

He's a silent man
With a quiet soul
he holds onto his memories
and will never let them go

I'll never find a way,
to live another day,
as long as you are gone,
this keeps on going on

Girl I saw you standing there,
Oh so long ago,
The face I never will forget,
The face i'll always know

Most memories have gone and past,
but somewhere deep inside,
The recollection of these thoughts,
is keeping me alive

I'll never find a way,
to live another day,
as long as you are gone,
this keeps on going on
#2
its ok, but some of the lyrics sound forcefully rhyme.
Just call me Julius, J, etc.
Taking an Internet break for a while, will come on when I can.
#3
I Havnt Seen Anything That I Can relate To Like This In A While I Agree With nowa90 But Still Great Job