an acoustic song im working on. not finnished

crit for crit.

times pass when they are bad
they pass faster when there good
in this life theres more than one chance
so just do what you wish you could
never let noone tell you , you cant
dont let them stand in your way
cause in the end its all on you
up until your final days

days change like autumn leaves
they can be colorful or dull
they disapear when winter draws near
but more will grow in thime
just because the seasons changer
doesnt mean it for the worst
Last edited by beyondthegrave at Jan 3, 2009,