#1
I recently started to get more into..more aspects of music then just guitar. I'm trying to put together a project type thing of just myself. Here is what I came up with, for..lyrics.

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Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, quick.
I'm left waiting, for the emotion to stick.
Calling your name out loud.
Looking up to see nothing but a dark cloud.
The storm is coming;
and the flood will put this all to an end.

Don't forget to grab a life jacket.
For this will be a bumpy ride.
Don't forget to grab a life jacket.
For you may be taken by the tide.
(x2)

Keep breathing and don't let go.
Keep a grip on the rope at hand.
Listen to the sound of my voice, and follow my commands;

(Keep breathing and don't let go.
Keep a grip on the rope at hand.
Listen to the sound of my voice, and follow my commands.)

Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, quick.
I'm stuck out at sea.
Just waitng for you to find me.

Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, fast.
Please come find me, so we can go home atlast.
#2
Very nice, I like it.
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#4
I like the green and I think the red could be better

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I recently started to get more into..more aspects of music then just guitar. I'm trying to put together a project type thing of just myself. Here is what I came up with, for..lyrics.

----------------------------

Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, quick.

I'm left waiting, for the emotion to stick.
Calling your name out loud.
Looking up to see nothing but a dark cloud.
The storm is coming;
and the flood will put this all to an end.

Don't forget to grab a life jacket.
For this will be a bumpy ride.

Don't forget to grab a life jacket.
For you may be taken by the tide.
(x2)

Don't forget to grab a life jacket
you may be washed away by the tide. Just my 0.02

Keep breathing and don't let go.
Keep a grip on the rope at hand.
Listen to the sound of my voice, and follow my commands;


(Keep breathing and don't let go.
Keep a grip on the rope at hand.
Listen to the sound of my voice, and follow my commands.)

Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, quick.
I'm stuck out at sea.
Just waitng for you to find me.

Don't hold your breathe.
We're going nowhere, fast.
Please come find me, so we can go home at last.


I like it: a solid work. Care to see mine? Dragon's breath and Starlight.
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Last edited by Shadow_Hawk at Jan 4, 2009,
#5
Thanks for the response and the feedback I'll try and think of something to take place of the red.
I left a reply on yours as well!
#6
I liked it. I think the whole idea of taking sea of emotions and then having it set out like you're on an actual ship sailing the sea. Nice solid job.
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