#1
this one was would be ideal for a musical but i suspect it would be more suited to a Narrowway than a Broadway Production..

THE FOOL HAS SAID
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The fool has said within his heart
That there is no God
The Lord looks down from heaven to see
If someone understands
They’ve all become corrupt and choose
Nighttime over day
They’ve all become corrupt and turned
Each one to his own way

The fool has said within his heart
God no longer cares
I do just as I please because
No blame will come my way
Don’t waste my time with pious talk
Of God and righteousness
I’ve made my choice to live this way
And I’ll bear the consequence

The wise man says within his heart
In God I do believe
He seeks to live his life with all
In perfect harmony
His delight is in God’s Word
He seeks to do His will
The Lord shall keep His hand on him
And guard him from all ill

The fool has said within his heart
Don’t think it very odd
For me to live so selfishly
And leave no time for God
I make my own decisions
When all is said and done
I live my life by the golden rule
Look after number one

Based around the text of Psalm 14.
"The heart of a fool is in his mouth, but the mouth of a wise man is in his heart"
- Benjamin Franklin

Al
#2
i like how it mostly sticks to 8 syllables followed by 5-6 syllables
i also like how its inspired by the bible, but it isnt like some church song.
id listen to the song but somethings wrong with my computer.
Yea that's right, I want something to explode

I've been deaf, now I want noise

LOUD LOVE