can someone help me write this son plz so far ive got

thats when laughter turns to tears
ive felt that way (over the years)
time fades and i remain (unchanged)

(times) are changing
(tempers) are raging
(but i remain(unaging))

bits in brakets() are screams and at the and where it goes (but i remain(unaging)) the remain is screamed and held and the unaging is screamed over the tom of it.

plz i welcome ur ideas with open arms

also any tabs for possible guitar/ bass lines will be greatfuly taken into considderation.
Last edited by grim reaper1 at Jan 5, 2009,
For 50 bucks I will write u a song.

Seriously why should other people write songs for you. If I would write something for you it would be mine, cause I wrote it, unless I sell it or give away the rights.

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