Hey guys, this is a little somethin I just wrote up today. I might expand it and make it into a full song but thats sort of up for you guys to decide. Anyway, just check it out and tell me what you think. Thanks!!
Unfortunately I don't have GP 5 so I had to just listen to the midi file and therefore can't reference anything directly...but the intro riff seemed decent...I wasn't too fond of the change where the bass took over. Seemed too chaotic, although not sure if that was your intent or not....just seemed to me could use some more structure and dynamics??? Keep with this one though...could definitely go somewhere :p

Sorry, but to me it all sound really dissonant, try and expand on what you did in bars 26 and 27.
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