#1
C4C

Devoid
The sunset fades
Among vast cages
Hope is hopeless

An eternal rain
But once forgotten
Bounds are boundless

Here lies she
Left for none
Ends are endless

Imagine no presence
But once remembered
Thoughts are thoughtless
#2
Quote by JGsox33

An eternal rain
But once forgotten
Bounds are boundless


This was the only stanza I didn't like. It didn't seem to have much to do with the main idea. Not only that, but the individual lines don't really connect with each other. Other than that, it was really good! I especially liked the first stanza.