This is actually the first song I have ever written on Power Tab, if you know the program there are no drums and I didn't want to write out the notes for the vocals. I plan on making a recording of this, but I just want to know how I can improve it. Any comments would be great, just dont be too too harsh, I am new.

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Gibson Custom Les Paul Left handed

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Maxon OD808

Peavey 6505 Halfstack

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