#2
the timing seemed off at a lot of the parts. better than i could do when it comes to improv though. the playing seemed sloppy a lot of the time. the guitar seems its completely panned to the left and it is kind of sounding a little wierd. your bends seemed out of tune work on that. these are just things to work on overall it was not to bad. crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1044355
#4
yeah, same thing as the guy above, sometimes out of tune a little. seems like you got the main idea you just got to refine your riffs and just keep on working, Not bad but some parts were really iffy and didnt really work well. But all it takes is practice.

Ive been playing for about 2 years, check out the little improvisation vid i made, its in my sig
My Gear

Epiphone Les Paul Standard
Epiphone Elitist Paul Mccartney Texan
Orange Tiny Terror
Vox Valvetronix AD 30
Vox V847 Wah
Metal Muff EQ (broken )
Boss RC-2 Loop pedal

Me playing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0unpDZFIWA