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Ok the beginning isn't done yet I just cant find the right words. And yes they are short but they are intended to be a Punk/hardcore/metalcore song. Please look over and give ideas if you can and critizisime.

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I need a communion, Im not like them.
Get things sort out before I get too ill.
Im Losing it.

I have shined like morning sun in the darkest depths of the deepest oceans.
After all this time Ive come to realize im at the top of the chain.
So callow, Actions hallow
Choking on sea water, the smell of salt heavy on my breathe
Im ashamed, Oh so ashamed.

Neither blind or deaf to a world I used to be...
Begging to set me free...
From a Goddamn cold world...
I Reign Supreme..
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