#1
Not sure how it came about I was rather happy with how it turned out. Could be cleaned up a little bit but I like the initial composition. Wish the solos stood out more, I actually got some nice phrasing but it blends to easily with the rhythm.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7218441

But yeah, bad crit, good crit, i'll take any comments. Feel free to tell me it sucks, if it does.
High Cardinal of Zeppelinism PM TheHeartbreaker to join and
"Co-Founder (and Yoda) of the Star Wars Universe. PM me or SethMegadefan to join.


' " The last enemy that shall be destroyed is death"...'-p.269-Deathly Hallows
#2
Not bad, not bad at all, got a nice little grove to it, i think it would be really east to sing along with