#1
1) quit whining over existence; you're here.
breath in or get the fuck out.
[hands nick a gun]

2) to breathe you need fuel.
raw forms of food that can be broken down,
giving off energy. work is neccessary
for bread and circuses, women as well.
[tosses a newspaper my way, magically
spilling open to the classified ads]

3) enlistment for four years.
"gotta get ya' sea legs somewhere"
this i didn't mind in the least bit
[produced a lighter and watched these letters burn]
"Seeking a highly motivated individual..."
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Last edited by freshtunes at Jan 8, 2009,
#2
i don't really know what to think of this. if i discern some unifying theme behind it, i'll come back. in the meantime, i would say that the second stanza is not really a goal, but could be reworded into one.
#3
I have no idea what the hell you mean by any of this.


That's why I love it so much.
Q: Favourite Pink Floyd song?
A: The one where they get wicked high and play Emin and A for an hour.
#4
one can never fault you for originallity. Just when t seemed like you were falling into a rut, bam, here it is. This was so intricate, yet devilishly simple. I loved it.
#5
gotta keep it fresh!

Edit: not a bump, it was far up on the page. i wont comment unless its more than halfway up for that very reason.
Quote by ottoavist

i suppose there's a chance
i'm just a litte too shallow to consider
that maybe i've been a little more eager
each day to wake up and take a shower
brush my teeth and smile for the mirror
Last edited by freshtunes at Jan 8, 2009,