#1
Break away from the pain
Stolen drugs driving me insane.
Drop 'em down, twist and turn
I'm feelin' it, feelin' the burn.

Break me,
I'll never learn
You're tearing me up inside
It's time for me to feel the burn

*Chorus*
I ****in' hate you!
But I can't quit you!
Oh god I love you!
**** you...

Takin' my time
I wanna feel this all night
I'll die with a smile on my face
Why am I a complete a disgrace?

Slowly suck the life from me
I feel it end as my life bleeds
This constant high is taking it's turn
I'm feelin' it, feelin' the burn.

ChorusX2

Oh god, I can't stand this feeling in my head
I wish that I was dead
These drugs won't kill the pain
They're just driving me insane
Bury me!
I'm tired of this hell...
Scream for me!
Release me from your spell...
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It's pretty old, I think I wrote it about two years ago.

IMO, it's mediocre, needs work. Let me know what you think, any suggestions would be great, I just can't seem to figure out where to go with it.
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Join Me Or Die

Rebuild these crumbling walls,
Reclaim the cynicals
Starting in on another violation
Post traumatic fear and trepidation

Join me in another death
Beg me for another breath
Praise me with your hands held high
You will join me...Or Die!

Send them to their own fate
Don't fear, don't discriminate
Beat it in their heads
Or beat them 'til they're dead
If they won't conform
Then they'll live their lives in war

Join me in another death
Beg me for another breath
Praise me with your hands held high
You will join me...

Ohhh~
I can't look you in they eyes
For fear of discovering these selfish lies
Bleed~
I'll bleed for the world in the end
So follow me in my fateful death

Join me in another death
Beg me for another breath
Praise me with your hands held high
You will join me...Or Die!
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"Ignorance runs rampant through this virus we call life, dead one day, alive the next, never breaking a stride. As I take it all in and realize, nothing we do can stop it, I release the hatred from my eyes, only to feel it within."
Last edited by crackhutch at Jan 9, 2009,
#2
1 - lern 2 cuss. **** looks like shit. fuck looks better on the page.

2 - *reported*
only one piece per thread.
please read the rules in the announcement at the top of this forum.
knowing them will help you from getting your threads closed.

3 - once this is closed, repost.
see you there.
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Last edited by SomeoneYouKnew at Jan 9, 2009,