Sounded Awful.....

But I enjoyed it.

If you want actual feedback.

The vocals were patchy. Thery were pretty good in places but a bit flat in others. You should transpose this down say a step ro half a step as It is also slightly out of your range by sound of things. The guitar playing it's self was pretty tight although your guitar sounds out of tune.

It didn't sound awful by the way. It sounded fine.
Flap it and enjoy yourself...

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Cool, thanks. :-D

My guitar sounds out of tune?? I tuned it with my Korg tuner! :-o

and I know it's not amazing, I just thought.. you know, why not!? :-p