#1
I've made this mess so easily
Tryin' to find out what it means
To grasp a concept easily
This is just the begining

A time lapse to tell time is slow
It speeds up after your gentle moan
You breath deep so hard and fast
This is just the begining

Realise, this is the start of something
Open your eyes, We're at the heart of it
Theorize, I need to quench my dying thirst.
But I've forgotten how to drink

Hit the breaks 'cause we're goin' fast
I'm broke nothings gonna last
my times up after counting to ten
We're well past the begining

Realise, this is the start of something
Open your eyes, We're at the heart of it
Theorize, I need to quench my dying thirst
But I've forgotten how to drink

Repeat with a more intense melody.

End.
"Whats that noise??"

"... Jazz"
#2
I've made this mess so easily
Tryin' to find out what it means
To grasp a concept easily
This is just the begining
u rhymed easily with... easily.
A time lapse to tell time is slow
It speeds up after your gentle moan
You breath deep so hard and fast
This is just the begining

Realise, this is the start of something
Open your eyes, We're at the heart of it
Theorize, I need to quench my dying thirst.
But I've forgotten how to drink

Hit the breaks 'cause we're goin' fast
I'm broke nothings gonna last
my times up after counting to ten
We're well past the begining

Realise, this is the start of something
Open your eyes, We're at the heart of it
Theorize, I need to quench my dying thirst
But I've forgotten how to drink


the only problem i had was with the first part. but overall pretty good.
C4C?
sweet life in sig